Project: fictionalized fact or factionalized fiction
this video is about how students supposedly study better with music playing. This student, however, decides to make his own music to study to and ends up getting so caught up in the whole ordeal that he ends up with a failing grade anyways.
3 comments:
Other than the fact that you had your student playing music instead of studying to music for your animation I think you executed everything else very well. The choppy/jumpy music fits well with the stop animation imagery. Also the pace of the piece was slow enough to understand and not too fast as though to get lost with what is going on.
Maybe you could have had your student listening to the stereo or radio station and getting up to change the channels as a better way to fit your theory. or to fit more along with what you already have created have the student playing "air" instruments along to the music even though I know that will take a lot of patience and timing. Either way, nice job!
I thought you did a pretty good job getting your concept across. I thought the audio was pretty good however i think it would have been nice if the audio that you had worked together a little more with when the guy was playing with the instruments. I also think that it might have been nice to show a little more of the struggle between needing to study and not wanting to.
I thought the actual execution of the animation was well done and it seemed to flow pretty well.
good job
first off, it must have taken so many pictures to put this stop-motion together huh?! BUT the result was so worth it, i think! Theme and and pace flows perfectly well together, it's easy to grasp that when we study we tend to be distracted by more entertaining things. I study with music on too, haha! so I blame him to get lost in the music (but shouldn't to the point that failed his test lol) Composition, you showed a lot of different angles and point of views, i like how you gave life to that piece of paper. Sound is great as well, very energetic and lively. When you transitioned the scenes thru his eyes, it was smooth, but i wonder if a different approach would look more smoother rather than his eyes. but either ways, your product was great!
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