My reference for the idea of this animation is how a lot of people have become vegetarians. So I just took the exact opposite approach to it and went with the idea of saving the vegetables and eating meat.
1. The pacing of your animation reminded me of those after school special T.V. episodes where you are supposed to learn some big lesson about talking to strangers or something. Maybe you were referencing that? I liked how you had this slow repetitive movement of your drawn figure and then there was the unexpected element of you coming onto the screen.
2. I did not really understand your concept but I'm sure that has a lot to do with your sound acting up.
3. The sound pretty much matched the audio, but again...I wish you would have fixed the audio portion in which you were speaking.
Overall this came together very well. I saw the insane amount of hand drawn images you prepared for this animation and the time and effort allowed you to have a fairly smooth animation. I really like the hand rendered aesthetic of the entire piece. It seems to enhance the feeling of being in a dirty factory or "vegetable" processing facility. The sounds worked well with the piece. The main areas I would focus on a bit more are the ending where the video plays. The words are definitely a bit hard to hear/understand. I think with a bit more clarity, the message would come across much clearer. I knew what your concept was and the animation made perfect sense, but to someone who didn't know and couldn't hear the talking, it may be a bit confusing. Overall, very well done and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!
Your pacing is good, and flows together nicely. I was kinda confused about the idea/theme at the beginning and plus your message at the end was hard to comprehend as well. The composition, you kept it with minimum colors, and it makes the viewer focus on the "vegetables" more, and was that the vegetables on the moving surface?! The sounds definitely synced with every movement. Anyhow, I think you managed to create a smooth animation, but just focus on the clarity of some things.
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My reference for the idea of this animation is how a lot of people have become vegetarians. So I just took the exact opposite approach to it and went with the idea of saving the vegetables and eating meat.
1. The pacing of your animation reminded me of those after school special T.V. episodes where you are supposed to learn some big lesson about talking to strangers or something. Maybe you were referencing that? I liked how you had this slow repetitive movement of your drawn figure and then there was the unexpected element of you coming onto the screen.
2. I did not really understand your concept but I'm sure that has a lot to do with your sound acting up.
3. The sound pretty much matched the audio, but again...I wish you would have fixed the audio portion in which you were speaking.
Overall this came together very well. I saw the insane amount of hand drawn images you prepared for this animation and the time and effort allowed you to have a fairly smooth animation. I really like the hand rendered aesthetic of the entire piece. It seems to enhance the feeling of being in a dirty factory or "vegetable" processing facility. The sounds worked well with the piece. The main areas I would focus on a bit more are the ending where the video plays. The words are definitely a bit hard to hear/understand. I think with a bit more clarity, the message would come across much clearer. I knew what your concept was and the animation made perfect sense, but to someone who didn't know and couldn't hear the talking, it may be a bit confusing. Overall, very well done and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!
Your pacing is good, and flows together nicely. I was kinda confused about the idea/theme at the beginning and plus your message at the end was hard to comprehend as well. The composition, you kept it with minimum colors, and it makes the viewer focus on the "vegetables" more, and was that the vegetables on the moving surface?! The sounds definitely synced with every movement. Anyhow, I think you managed to create a smooth animation, but just focus on the clarity of some things.
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