well done. the video runs smoothly and the colors help make the piece vibrant and alive. i think it was a good idea to use a little box type cart in the beginning to bring the lines in. You have also incorporated your word into the video, making it apparent throughout all the frames.
I really really really loved this sequence. I feel like it represents the word better, but also is an interesting take and not so generic. The motions are really smooth and the colors work really well with the composition. It's very exciting and vibrant and you did really well.
The composition is wonderful! good timing for the repetition. I want to say that the little car could be emphasized a little more, BUT the abstraction of the building and lights made up for that. Plus, you did 2 animations anyway! lol
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well done.
the video runs smoothly and the colors help make the piece vibrant and alive. i think it was a good idea to use a little box type cart in the beginning to bring the lines in. You have also incorporated your word into the video, making it apparent throughout all the frames.
I really really really loved this sequence. I feel like it represents the word better, but also is an interesting take and not so generic. The motions are really smooth and the colors work really well with the composition. It's very exciting and vibrant and you did really well.
The composition is wonderful! good timing for the repetition. I want to say that the little car could be emphasized a little more, BUT the abstraction of the building and lights made up for that. Plus, you did 2 animations anyway! lol
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