It would have been nice to see the oil can catch on fire or something since you had it smoking. Conceptual your video was interesting and your drawings were good but I wish that your animation had done another movement or there was another element to it.
Working: -You have very smooth animation, it is not choppy. -It is also very clean. Not any stray lines. -The animation of his eyes getting bigger as he drinks the oil is a nice touch.
Not Working: -The motion seems too slow. It seems like he is moving slower than real time. -The smoke ring was not very apparent to me because I was watching what the hand was going to do. Somehow make it a little more visible. -The amount of oil in the small can will never fill up a container as big as him.
Comments: I was hoping something would catch on fire since he was smoking a cigarette. Haha
I agree with the others that there should have been fire involved, lol. I don't think it looks as much like an oil can as it could, maybe it could say "Oil" on it....or does the little can say it? It's too small to see in this setting. The animation is smooth and well done; I like the smoke ring. The scene is very simple and there's nothing distracting, but it's also a little bland. It loops well and the movement of the eyebrows give the character more expression.
3 comments:
It would have been nice to see the oil can catch on fire or something since you had it smoking. Conceptual your video was interesting and your drawings were good but I wish that your animation had done another movement or there was another element to it.
Working:
-You have very smooth animation, it is not choppy.
-It is also very clean. Not any stray lines.
-The animation of his eyes getting bigger as he drinks the oil is a nice touch.
Not Working:
-The motion seems too slow. It seems like he is moving slower than real time.
-The smoke ring was not very apparent to me because I was watching what the hand was going to do. Somehow make it a little more visible.
-The amount of oil in the small can will never fill up a container as big as him.
Comments:
I was hoping something would catch on fire since he was smoking a cigarette. Haha
Thomas Edwards
I agree with the others that there should have been fire involved, lol. I don't think it looks as much like an oil can as it could, maybe it could say "Oil" on it....or does the little can say it? It's too small to see in this setting. The animation is smooth and well done; I like the smoke ring. The scene is very simple and there's nothing distracting, but it's also a little bland. It loops well and the movement of the eyebrows give the character more expression.
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