I think your precise consistency remains well composed as the animation progress. Clean lines and clear message of producing, making something. However, I'm kinda confused of what the oject really is. Perhaps a one line exp,anation would help a lot. Either way, it's great!
you did well on the design of your character and the movement flows very well. being your first animation, you seemed to catch on pretty quickly. I kind of wish i could see your character do something different besides do a flip, but i really liked what you did at the end when he lands and falls apart and then falls back on himself. I think that was a really creative way to finish up the sequence.
i'm a little confused about what the actual object it, it looks like it may be a pump or something. it could use more clarification. the movements of the object work well and it feels as if the word engineering is being acted out.
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I think your precise consistency remains well composed as the animation progress. Clean lines and clear message of producing, making something. However, I'm kinda confused of what the oject really is. Perhaps a one line exp,anation would help a lot. Either way, it's great!
you did well on the design of your character and the movement flows very well. being your first animation, you seemed to catch on pretty quickly. I kind of wish i could see your character do something different besides do a flip, but i really liked what you did at the end when he lands and falls apart and then falls back on himself. I think that was a really creative way to finish up the sequence.
i'm a little confused about what the actual object it, it looks like it may be a pump or something. it could use more clarification. the movements of the object work well and it feels as if the word engineering is being acted out.
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