I'm not too sure if I would have to think about the video a while or not to determine your word, however, its very apparent that the rocket-ship guy is annoyed or bothered by the camera and I thought you showed that well. I liked how you chose to depict the facial features, with all of the features compact and close together it gives the characters a unique cartoony look.
I don't know if i would get publicity from this without knowing the word but if you know the word the animation fits well.
I thought your use of having the camera change the direction that he was facing was good. the only thing i would say about it is that you might want to add a few more frames in the turn to make it less jumpy.
the flashes were a good way of expressing the idea of taking a picture.
I might want to try and develop the person a little more. maybe work with more expressions on the face.
Working: -Perspective Change with the camera character look great. -Flash is well represented by the flashing lines. -Very smooth animation such as the camera turning was immaculate.
Not working: -The space ship coming in on the right side could be redrawn with each from as opposed to moving it around which gives it the "bobbling" effect. This will help his smoke look real also.
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I'm not too sure if I would have to think about the video a while or not to determine your word, however, its very apparent that the rocket-ship guy is annoyed or bothered by the camera and I thought you showed that well. I liked how you chose to depict the facial features, with all of the features compact and close together it gives the characters a unique cartoony look.
I don't know if i would get publicity from this without knowing the word but if you know the word the animation fits well.
I thought your use of having the camera change the direction that he was facing was good. the only thing i would say about it is that you might want to add a few more frames in the turn to make it less jumpy.
the flashes were a good way of expressing the idea of taking a picture.
I might want to try and develop the person a little more. maybe work with more expressions on the face.
overall it looks great.
Working:
-Perspective Change with the camera character look great.
-Flash is well represented by the flashing lines.
-Very smooth animation such as the camera turning was immaculate.
Not working:
-The space ship coming in on the right side could be redrawn with each from as opposed to moving it around which gives it the "bobbling" effect. This will help his smoke look real also.
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