It looks like the first half of your video flows very well and is well drawn, but once the viewer starts to zoom into the picture it get a bit jumpy. I think it could use some extra keyframes there to help the smoothness in the last half. I particularly liked how the cords sprouted from the character when he cried because it gave me a connection of tears.
i enjoyed your character design and how you incorporated an octopus into it. It's definitely an interesting take on the word. You did a really good job with the movement of your character as well. The tentacle cords come out smoothly and the turn was well executed. Should you choose to expand on this animation sequence maybe you could thing of another motion he could perform before he plugs himself. Really good job though!
quan quan quan, octoplug has a great character design. i love what you have done with your video. the movements are somewhat jumpy towards the end, but the overall piece is a success. the cords that radiate from the octo gives the piece some much flavor and adds to the personality of the character. great job boo boo
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It looks like the first half of your video flows very well and is well drawn, but once the viewer starts to zoom into the picture it get a bit jumpy. I think it could use some extra keyframes there to help the smoothness in the last half. I particularly liked how the cords sprouted from the character when he cried because it gave me a connection of tears.
i enjoyed your character design and how you incorporated an octopus into it. It's definitely an interesting take on the word. You did a really good job with the movement of your character as well. The tentacle cords come out smoothly and the turn was well executed. Should you choose to expand on this animation sequence maybe you could thing of another motion he could perform before he plugs himself. Really good job though!
quan quan quan,
octoplug has a great character design.
i love what you have done with your video.
the movements are somewhat jumpy towards the end, but the overall piece is a success. the cords that radiate from the octo gives the piece some much flavor and adds to the personality of the character.
great job boo boo
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