Conceptually the sorting idea works really well, however maybe the movement that they do doesnt fit very well with the object. Perhaps having them slide across a surface instead of jumping. I like the details that was put into the doll.
I like your idea for the dolls, especially how they are sorting themselves; they work well because most people are familiar with them and realize that you have to sort them by size in order for them to work. They are very neat and well-rendered, aesthetically pleasing. Giving the biggest doll dark hair distinguishes her from the others, but I think that if you were going to make one different you should have made them all different, like change the dress/hair style slightly on one of the smaller dolls. As for the characters' movement, I think the bouncing/tottering suggests that the material they are made of is firm, and I like how the medium doll sort of knocks on the bigger one to be let in.
the animation is a good representation of your word and it seems that it was animated pretty smoothly. i would like for the biggest character to completely leave the screen at the end (it's a bit of a distraction to have it still visible at the edge).
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Conceptually the sorting idea works really well, however maybe the movement that they do doesnt fit very well with the object. Perhaps having them slide across a surface instead of jumping. I like the details that was put into the doll.
I like your idea for the dolls, especially how they are sorting themselves; they work well because most people are familiar with them and realize that you have to sort them by size in order for them to work. They are very neat and well-rendered, aesthetically pleasing. Giving the biggest doll dark hair distinguishes her from the others, but I think that if you were going to make one different you should have made them all different, like change the dress/hair style slightly on one of the smaller dolls. As for the characters' movement, I think the bouncing/tottering suggests that the material they are made of is firm, and I like how the medium doll sort of knocks on the bigger one to be let in.
the animation is a good representation of your word and it seems that it was animated pretty smoothly. i would like for the biggest character to completely leave the screen at the end (it's a bit of a distraction to have it still visible at the edge).
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