Nice job. The concept of two signs in love is interesting. You left the males comments to the female to the viewers imagination, but we are definitely led to believe that whatever was said "sold" the two on love.
Cool signs as characters. The message comes across because something is sold. As far as this animation being a loop, its not. Other than that its good simple and to the point.
I think the idea for this animation was cute. It was very simple, and to the point. I like the movement in the guy sign's eyes when he lands. (It was an interesting movement.) I also enjoyed the way the faces on the signs changed to express "love", you did a good job on that. Some things that I would suggest, is to not mix lines. The outlines on the signs are very skinny and symmetrical. Then the smiles/eyes are very plump heavy lines. It kind of gives the effect that the faces were drawn on, so it lowers the register a bit. Overall, I like it. :)
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Nice job. The concept of two signs in love is interesting. You left the males comments to the female to the viewers imagination, but we are definitely led to believe that whatever was said "sold" the two on love.
Cool signs as characters. The message comes across because something is sold. As far as this animation being a loop, its not. Other than that its good simple and to the point.
I think the idea for this animation was cute. It was very simple, and to the point. I like the movement in the guy sign's eyes when he lands. (It was an interesting movement.) I also enjoyed the way the faces on the signs changed to express "love", you did a good job on that. Some things that I would suggest, is to not mix lines. The outlines on the signs are very skinny and symmetrical. Then the smiles/eyes are very plump heavy lines. It kind of gives the effect that the faces were drawn on, so it lowers the register a bit. Overall, I like it. :)
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