overall I thought it was a great animation. I enjoyed the use of perspective and depth. on the character itself I think you could have used a little more variation on line width to separate parts of the subject. for example the body could be a little thicker line width while the zipper could be a little thinner, or the other way around.
you did a great job with the motion of the objects. the only thing that i would work on with the motion is towards the end when they combine its a little jumpy.
also it would be nice to see a little more at the end after they have combined.
Your drawings and the story line that you created for your characters were very well done. I think the anticipation and timing you made for your animation was great.
I was a little confused at the beginning of your animation because the halves of your body are so alike. If you would have made definite variations between hands and feet, I think the animation would have been clearer. However, I don't think your animation suffers from how they are drawn now.
Working: -The animation where the zipper butt was running into the distance was awesome. The perspective was perfect and the speed he ran was precisely captured. I was trying to make something move at a very fast speed and could not figure it out, so props to you on that. -The walking animation was very smooth with only a slight jump where you showed me, so you are aware of it. -The depth you created from the running zipper-man was excellent.
Not Working: -The one little skip that we talked about with the walker. -Color may be the next step.
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overall I thought it was a great animation. I enjoyed the use of perspective and depth. on the character itself I think you could have used a little more variation on line width to separate parts of the subject. for example the body could be a little thicker line width while the zipper could be a little thinner, or the other way around.
you did a great job with the motion of the objects. the only thing that i would work on with the motion is towards the end when they combine its a little jumpy.
also it would be nice to see a little more at the end after they have combined.
Your drawings and the story line that you created for your characters were very well done. I think the anticipation and timing you made for your animation was great.
I was a little confused at the beginning of your animation because the halves of your body are so alike. If you would have made definite variations between hands and feet, I think the animation would have been clearer. However, I don't think your animation suffers from how they are drawn now.
Working:
-The animation where the zipper butt was running into the distance was awesome. The perspective was perfect and the speed he ran was precisely captured. I was trying to make something move at a very fast speed and could not figure it out, so props to you on that.
-The walking animation was very smooth with only a slight jump where you showed me, so you are aware of it.
-The depth you created from the running zipper-man was excellent.
Not Working:
-The one little skip that we talked about with the walker.
-Color may be the next step.
Comments:
I love this one, excellent job.
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