This is a well thought out video that was put together nicely. the transitions are smooth. i did have to watch it a few times to really understand what was happening. the characters are very lively and have great personalities. you also used your word well in the piece. the cup seems to be suppling all the happiness. well done.
Your word is supply, yes? I like the concept of supplying, sorta like creating, starting and giving something.. supplying. That water bucket is giving water to the land, sky, sun, and cloud right? However, I think you could add some extra keyframes to make it less choppy. Overall, good job with the concept and character designs!
Very well done with the character designs, the cup, cloud, sun. The word comes across well with the cup supplying. It is a little choppy but that's nothing that can not be fixed. About the loop I think that this is hard since you used color and this way not possible. Other than that everything seems to fit well. Well done.
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This is a well thought out video that was put together nicely. the transitions are smooth. i did have to watch it a few times to really understand what was happening. the characters are very lively and have great personalities. you also used your word well in the piece. the cup seems to be suppling all the happiness. well done.
Your word is supply, yes? I like the concept of supplying, sorta like creating, starting and giving something.. supplying. That water bucket is giving water to the land, sky, sun, and cloud right? However, I think you could add some extra keyframes to make it less choppy. Overall, good job with the concept and character designs!
Very well done with the character designs, the cup, cloud, sun. The word comes across well with the cup supplying. It is a little choppy but that's nothing that can not be fixed. About the loop I think that this is hard since you used color and this way not possible. Other than that everything seems to fit well. Well done.
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