I really like the aesthetic of the site, and it seems to work pretty well with most of the work you've chosen to showcase; it's very clean and crisp, and I'm a sucker for lots of white space. The typeface fits the aesthetic, clean and minimal, and it's consistent over the whole site. In the portfolio section, I like that you used cropped thumbnails of the pieces, and the graphics in the contact page are well-rendered.
I wish the phone animation would continue looping like the mailbox and antenna do, and I think the sound on your contact page is too loud; it's blaring and unnerving if you're not expecting it. In the photo of you on the about page, I think you should have cropped the other person's face out a little bit more; it's distracting. I'm not sure of the point of the empty orange blocks in the portfolio section, they are mostly confusing because I keep wanting to click on them, I don't know if they're necessary since you have nine pieces of work, and nine boxes would also make a cube.
Overall, very well done site, all your code seems to be working fine and the design is visually appealing, there are just a few little things that take away from it.
ay kay kay you nailed it on take two! well done on the look of your site and the coding. the work looks great and the i see you got that phone to right. heeeyyy!
my only suggestion is that you take the extra squares away that contain no work. they are so clickable yet nothing happens. other than that wonderful job!
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I really like the aesthetic of the site, and it seems to work pretty well with most of the work you've chosen to showcase; it's very clean and crisp, and I'm a sucker for lots of white space. The typeface fits the aesthetic, clean and minimal, and it's consistent over the whole site. In the portfolio section, I like that you used cropped thumbnails of the pieces, and the graphics in the contact page are well-rendered.
I wish the phone animation would continue looping like the mailbox and antenna do, and I think the sound on your contact page is too loud; it's blaring and unnerving if you're not expecting it. In the photo of you on the about page, I think you should have cropped the other person's face out a little bit more; it's distracting. I'm not sure of the point of the empty orange blocks in the portfolio section, they are mostly confusing because I keep wanting to click on them, I don't know if they're necessary since you have nine pieces of work, and nine boxes would also make a cube.
Overall, very well done site, all your code seems to be working fine and the design is visually appealing, there are just a few little things that take away from it.
ay kay kay you nailed it on take two!
well done on the look of your site and the coding. the work looks great and the i see you got that phone to right. heeeyyy!
my only suggestion is that you take the extra squares away that contain no work. they are so clickable yet nothing happens. other than that wonderful job!
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