I really enjoyed how you animated the bird floating/flying away as if its startled. The falling apart caterpillar was a surprise too, it is not what someone would first suspect. I don't know what to think of the box that appears around him and shows that he is perhaps crazy? Because I cannot easily tell what is happening, perhaps make it more purposeful or take it out.
it looks great. everything is very smooth. the flying backwards is a good touch. the emotions on the face are nice i wonder if you could exaggerate them a little to make it more obvious. I am not sure that I would understand the word without the name of it. I think i would take it as "break" because the little figure breaks apart. overall great job
i enjoyed the way you animated the bird and it's eyes. I was a little confused about why you put the framed the head in a few key frames. I thought the concept was interesting but a little confused how you meant for it to be "cut." Besides those concepts, the animation itself was done very well. You did a good job showing changes in emotion for the bird and even the caterpillar when it dies.
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I really enjoyed how you animated the bird floating/flying away as if its startled. The falling apart caterpillar was a surprise too, it is not what someone would first suspect. I don't know what to think of the box that appears around him and shows that he is perhaps crazy? Because I cannot easily tell what is happening, perhaps make it more purposeful or take it out.
it looks great. everything is very smooth. the flying backwards is a good touch. the emotions on the face are nice i wonder if you could exaggerate them a little to make it more obvious. I am not sure that I would understand the word without the name of it. I think i would take it as "break" because the little figure breaks apart. overall great job
i enjoyed the way you animated the bird and it's eyes. I was a little confused about why you put the framed the head in a few key frames. I thought the concept was interesting but a little confused how you meant for it to be "cut." Besides those concepts, the animation itself was done very well. You did a good job showing changes in emotion for the bird and even the caterpillar when it dies.
overall, good job.
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